Improve wordings for DSA text

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diff --git a/dsa-texts/4.19.152-1 b/dsa-texts/4.19.152-1
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@@ -2,41 +2,41 @@ Package: linux
 CVE ID: CVE-2020-12351 CVE-2020-12352 CVE-2020-25211 CVE-2020-25643 CVE-2020-25645
 
 Several vulnerabilities have been discovered in the Linux kernel that
-may lead to a privilege escalation, denial of service or information
-leaks.
+may lead to the execution of arbitrary code, privilege escalation,
+denial of service or information leaks.
 
 CVE-2020-12351
 
     Andy Nguyen discovered a flaw in the Bluetooth implementation in the
     way L2CAP packets with A2MP CID are handled. A remote attacker in
-    short distance knowing the victim's bd address can send a malicious
-    l2cap packet and cause denial of service or possibly arbitrary code
-    execution with kernel privileges.
+    short distance knowing the victim's Bluetooth device address can
+    send a malicious l2cap packet and cause denial of service or
+    possibly arbitrary code execution with kernel privileges.
 
 CVE-2020-12352
 
-    Andy Nguyen discovered flaw in the Bluetooth implementation. Stack
+    Andy Nguyen discovered a flaw in the Bluetooth implementation. Stack
     memory is not properly initialised when handling certain AMP
-    packets. A remote attacker in short distance knowing the victim's bd
-    address can retrieve kernel stack information.
+    packets. A remote attacker in short distance knowing the victim's
+    Bluetooth device address address can retrieve kernel stack
+    information.
 
 CVE-2020-25211
 
-    A flaw was discovered in netfilter subsystem. A local attacker able
-    to inject conntrack netlink configuration can take advantage of this
-    flaw to cause a denial of service or trigger use of of incorrect
-    protocol numbers.
+    A flaw was discovered in netfilter subsystem. A local attacker
+    able to inject conntrack Netlink configuration can cause a denial
+    of service.
 
 CVE-2020-25643
 
     ChenNan Of Chaitin Security Research Lab discovered a flaw in the
-    hdlc_ppp module. Improper input validation in the ppp_cp_parse_cr
-    function leads to memory corruption and read overflow.
+    hdlc_ppp module. Improper input validation in the ppp_cp_parse_cr()
+    function may lead to memory corruption and information disclosure.
 
 CVE-2020-25645
 
     A flaw was discovered in the interface driver for GENEVE
-    encapsulated traffic when combined with IPsec. When IPsec is
+    encapsulated traffic when combined with IPsec. If IPsec is
     configured to encrypt traffic for the specific UDP port used by the
     GENEVE tunnel, tunneled data isn't correctly routed over the
     encrypted link and sent unencrypted instead.